शनिवार, 1 सितंबर 2012

लघुकथाएं



१- अपराध का ग्राफ
''मारो स्सारे खों.. हाँथ-गोड़े तोड़ देओ.. अगाऊं सें ऐसी हिम्मत ना परे जाकी. एकई दिना में भूखो मरो जा रओ थो कमीन.. हमायेई खलिहान सें दाल चुरान चलो... जौन थार में खात हेगो उअई में छेद कर रओ.. जासें कई हती के दो रोज बाद मजूरी दे देहें लेकिन रत्तीभर सबर नईयां...'' कहते हुए मुखिया ने दो किलो दाल चुराते पकड़े गए अपने खेतिहर मजदूर पर लात-घूंसे चलाने शुरू कर दिए.
''हाय मर जेँ मालिक, खाली पेट हें, पेट में लातें ना मारो.. हाय दद्दा मर जेहें'' वो गरीब रोये जा रहा था.
''औकात तो देखो जाकी अब्नों खें जुबान लड़ा रओ... मट्टी को तेल डारो ससुरे पे फूंक तो देओ जाए'' नशे में धुत मुखिया का बेटा गुर्राया..

रात बीती तो मुखिया और उसके बेटे का नशा उतर चुका था, दरवाज़े पर पुलिस थी. मजदूर ७० प्रतिशत जली हुई हालत में सरकारी हस्पताल में जिन्दगी और मौत के बीच झूल रहा था.
पुलिस ने दोनों पक्षों को समझाया. मजदूर के सारे इलाज़ कराने की जिम्मेवारी लेने की बात पर दोनों पक्षों में तपशिया करा दिया गया.
बेचारी पुलिस भी क्या करती, राज्य सरकार का दबाव था कि राज्य में अपराध का ग्राफ नीचे जाना चाहिए.


2- इंतज़ार 
घंटाघर की घड़ी ने रात के दस घंटे टन्कारना शुरू किया.. टन-टन-टन की आवाज़ से 'उसने' अपने क़दमों की रफ़्तार तेज़ करने की कोशिश की.. भागा भी लेकिन सामने के स्टॉप से उसके मोहल्ले  की ओर जाने वाली आखिरी बस की रफ़्तार ज्यादा निकली. बस उसकी नज़रों के सामने देखते-२ ओझल हो गई. दिन भर की थकान हावी हो रही थी उसपर और घर अभी भी दो किलोमीटर बाकी था जो अब उसे मजबूरन पैदल ही तय करना था. सड़क के बीच में पड़े ईंटे के टुकड़े को जोर से ठोकर लगाकर सन्नाटे को सुनाते हुआ चीखा वो, ''साला कमीना, एक मिनट को नहीं रोक सकता था..''
अगले दिन वो समय से पहले बस में था.. अज़ब सी बेचैनी से घिरा हुआ. बार-२ घड़ी देखता, दस बजे का इंतज़ार था.. अभी तक घंटाघर की घड़ी चीखी नहीं थी. वह गुस्से में भुनभुना रहा था,''साला बेवकूफ.. अब कौन सवारी आयेगी इतनी रात को. पता नहीं कब चलेगा.''
दीपक मशाल

48 टिप्‍पणियां:

  1. मै तेलुगु बॊलनॆवाला हूं.. हिन्दी मॆं अल्प्ज्ञ हूं...फिरभी आप का लघुकथा ‘इंतजार’ बहुत अच्छा लगा. (आपकी लघुकथा अच्छी लगी.. पता नज नहीं कौनसा वाक्य सही है)

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
    उत्तर
    1. కంది శంకరయ్య जी क्षमा चाहता हूँ कि मुझे तो तेलुगु की वर्णमाला भी नहीं आती, आपको इतनी हिन्दी आती है आप मुझसे कई गुना बेहतर हैं.... आपका हिन्दी के प्रति प्रेम है इसके लिए मैं आपको नमन करता हूँ. यहाँ जहाँ मैं रहता हूँ वहाँ कई मित्र हैदराबाद और आस-पास से हैं, उनको हिन्दी बोलते सुन लगता है कि काश मैंने भी तेलुगु सीखने का प्रयास किया होता. वैसे 'आपकी लघुकथा अच्छी लगी..' वाक्य सही है.
      एक बार फिर से लघुकथा पढ़ने और सराहने के लिए शुक्रिया.

      हटाएं
  2. पहली कथा की बोली पढ़ घर की याद आ गयी...

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
    उत्तर
    1. प्रवीण जी, कहीं आप भी बुंदेले-हरबोले तो नहीं???? :)

      हटाएं
  3. बहुत सुन्दर प्रस्तुति!
    आपकी इस उत्कृष्ट प्रविष्टी की चर्चा आज रविवार (2-09-2012) के चर्चा मंच पर भी होगी!
    सूचनार्थ!

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  4. I was very encouraged to find this site. I wanted to thank you for this special read. I definitely savored every little bit of it and I have bookmarked you to check out new stuff you post.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  5. Good efforts. All the best for future posts. I have bookmarked you. Well done. I read and like this post. Thanks.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  6. Thanks for showing up such fabulous information. I have bookmarked you and will remain in line with your new posts. I like this post, keep writing and give informative post...!

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  7. The post is very informative. It is a pleasure reading it. I have also bookmarked you for checking out new posts.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  8. Thanks for writing in such an encouraging post. I had a glimpse of it and couldn’t stop reading till I finished. I have already bookmarked you.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  9. The post is handsomely written. I have bookmarked you for keeping abreast with your new posts.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  10. It is a pleasure going through your post. I have bookmarked you to check out new stuff from your side.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  11. A very well-written post. I read and liked the post and have also bookmarked you. All the best for future endeavors.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  12. I was very encouraged to find this site. I wanted to thank you for this special read. I definitely savored every little bit of it and I have bookmarked you to check out new stuff you post.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  13. Good efforts. All the best for future posts. I have bookmarked you. Well done. I read and like this post. Thanks.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  14. Thanks for showing up such fabulous information. I have bookmarked you and will remain in line with your new posts. I like this post, keep writing and give informative post...!

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  15. The post is very informative. It is a pleasure reading it. I have also bookmarked you for checking out new posts.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  16. Thanks for writing in such an encouraging post. I had a glimpse of it and couldn’t stop reading till I finished. I have already bookmarked you.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  17. The post is handsomely written. I have bookmarked you for keeping abreast with your new posts.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  18. It is a pleasure going through your post. I have bookmarked you to check out new stuff from your side.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  19. It is a pleasure reading of your post. I have also bookmarked your blog for checking out new posts. I used to be able to find good infomation from your blog posts.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  20. What I look for the post many time. I have also bookmarked you for checking out new posts. It is a pleasure reading your blog posts.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  21. Excellent post it is a pleasure to reading it. I have bookmarked your post in my computer. Thank you so much.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  22. Your post was very cool. Your article is giving very useful information. It’s really very nice article. Thanks a lot.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  23. Your post is very informative. It is a pleasure reading it. I have also bookmarked you for checking out new posts. Thank you so much.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  24. I am really appreciate with your blog. Your blog are very valuable for me. Thank you so mauch for giving such a good information.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  25. It is a brilliant blog post. What I look for the post many time. Thanks for the share and really treasure your effort.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  26. Your blog was very awesome and I have also bookmarked your bog thanks a lot for a giving a useful information.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  27. It is a brilliant blog post. What I look for the post many time. Thanks for the share and really treasure your effort. Thank you so much.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  28. This blog is provide lots of good idea and your blog are very usefull for me. It is a very incredible post. Your post is very informative for me. Thanks a lot.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  29. Wow!!This post is very informative. It is a pleasure reading it. I have also bookmarked you for checking out new posts.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  30. It is incredible. You are so good to write the article there. Your article is really a very good article. I love your article. Keep it up.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  31. Your post is very informative. It is a pleasure reading it. I have also bookmarked you for checking out new posts.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  32. I am really appreciate with your blog. Your blog are very valuable for me. Thank you so mauch for giving such a good information.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  33. It is a brilliant blog post. What I look for the post many time. Thanks for the share and really treasure your effort. Thank you so much.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  34. Your blog was very awesome and I have also bookmarked your bog thanks a lot for a giving a useful information.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  35. This blog is provide lots of good idea and your blog are very usefull for me. It is a very incredible post. Your post is very informative for me. Thanks a lot.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  36. It’s not something I can forget, the post is really inspiring and I am indeed influenced.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  37. This is a really good read for me. Must agree that you are one of the coolest blogger I ever saw. Thanks for posting this useful information.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  38. Wow!!This post is very informative. It is a pleasure reading it. I have also bookmarked you for checking out new posts.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  39. Your post was very cool. Your article is giving very useful information. It’s really very nice article. Thanks a lot.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  40. Your post is very informative. It is a pleasure reading it. I have also bookmarked you for checking out new posts. Thank you so much.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  41. Excellent post it is a pleasure to reading it. I have bookmarked your post in my computer. Thank you so much.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  42. What I look for the post many time. Thanks for the share and really treasure your effort. Thank you so much.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  43. Thanks a lot for sharing this information with us all, it has really helped me that’s for sure. Thank you so much.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  44. Thanks to lots for sharing good information to me. Your post was very cool. Thank you so much…..

    उत्तर देंहटाएं
  45. Wonderful blog, I’m going to spend much more time reading about this topic. It is a very incredible post.

    उत्तर देंहटाएं

LinkWithin

Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...